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Adding to Dawn Of Life
Contributed by
dopetherapy
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:17:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The Storm Roared the lovers passion. The wind Sworming the lover in its arms. Looking to the swaying tree tops like it's lovers hair swaying amongst her face. Rain drops drizzling down her pale face kissing her lips. The thunder roared out i love you like a whisper of his sweet hypnotizing voice as the passion fadded off into the night leaving a dead silence amongst the torn wrist of the bewildered lover.
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Re: Adding to Dawn Of Life
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:55:50 PM AEST
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This is a start of a great story. Love the theme. keep it coming!
Kimberly :) |
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