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Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 06:55:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Silence swims unknowingly
through my tourtoured soul,
leaving me the blood
to drown in helplessly.
Crying to get attention i needlesly crave,
hoping to grab the hand
of a lover unknown.
I forgot the virtue of time
as my eyes witnessed cuts
strewn across my arm
carrying dreams away from harm.
To many memories travel like rain
across my eyes to a light
my prince tries to give.
He sends me dead flowers
in a beautiful vase
that will last forever in my eyes.
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gery_giggles
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2004-08-03 18:55:38]
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Re: No title
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by hooray_its_jen on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 07:20:56 PM AEST
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I disagree, I think it's a VERY good poem. I liked the last three lines also. Great write!
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:41:44 PM AEST
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This is very beautiful.....
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 01:02:50 PM AEST
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I also disagree, i think it is a great poem.
Such a sad write,
i hope things are working out for you now hun.
Lots of hugs,
Phil xxx |
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