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She Didn't Want to Die
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:03:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Late at night she sat there crying
And ever so slowly she was dying
She would cut her skin, slit by slit
Until she decided that was it
She took a piece of paper and pen
And went into her fathers den
Where she wrote him a note
She left it by his long rain coat
The sad note read:
When you read this I will be dead
I know you loved and cared about me
But you were the only one, you see
So this is where I leave you now
I wish that you only knew how
How badly that I hurt inside
Because that is the reason that I died
I just want to let you know
How much I loved you and Im sorry I didnt let it show
And that was the end of her little note
Then she stuck a gun down her throat
She said goodbye to this cruel place
And finally her pain became erased
But if you were to look into her eyes
You could see the painful lies
All the lies that she was told
The lies that she was told to hold
They filled her with such misery and pain
Which made her completely insane
She didnt really want to die
But no longer did she want to cry
But as you see her life did not prevail
And that is the end of this sad tale
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2004-08-03 20:03:12]
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Re: She Didn't Want to Die
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 10:31:47 PM AEST
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| excellent write. much emotion shown. |
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Re: She Didn't Want to Die
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:20:24 PM AEST
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| When i read this poem I had tears in my eyes it is so sad. Good write! |
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