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As Withered As The Heart In Me
Contributed by
Opium
on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 04:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Time passed so fast and weary were her hand
She just couldn't hold, and fell to the land
She floated like a feather on her way down
A withered beauty of a skin so gold and brown
She rose as the wind carried her in the air
And danced like a dream in figures so rare
The sun reflected on her beautifull naked skin
Creating a mix of colors so bright
The sight brought life back to my heart within
In nature's arms everything feels so right
On the riverbed she rested then drifted to nowhere
As the clear cold water moistured her golden hair
Her journey came to an end like a lost love in time
Like a sad requiem, like a bell's chime
She rested next to my feet near the oak tree
...she is a pale leaf, as withered as the heart in me.
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Opium
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2002-10-30 04:40:00]
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Re: As Withered As The Heart In Me
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 07:07:10 AM AEST
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| This was a beautiful poem,I really enjoyed this.Christina |
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Re: As Withered As The Heart In Me
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 07:15:41 AM AEST
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This was so beautiful
I really enjoyed reading this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: As Withered As The Heart In Me
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by gina on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 05:01:05 AM AEST
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| U'D BETTER KEEP OUR JOURNEYS PRIVATE, DONT GO AND TELL EVERYONE ABOUT IT PLZ |
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