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Still Won't Cry
Contributed by
Poetic_Angel
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Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
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Hes been through the death of people so close
The kind that hurts your heart the most
The ones he love and care for so much
One day is seen; next day cant touch
And though its killing him so deep inside
All those emotions he decides to hide
We both know how hard it is to try
To let go of a loved one you wish didnt die
Through all his pain Ive wondered why, why is it that he still wont cry
Hes been through so much yet so young
Anything he says isnt a slip of the tongue
Its what he wants to really say
Not the words you wish would come your way
Our words are so deep, Ive cried when I called
And before Id go to sleep, through his thoughts my feelings crawled
And when he feels my pain, I know his pain runs deeper
Sometimes I feel my angel tells him, Dont you know you have to keep her
If we ever part eternally & never say goodbye
It makes me want to wonder if he still wont cry
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Re: Still Won't Cry
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 06:08:07 AM AEST
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This one pulls the heartstrings.... beautiful write... though so sad...
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Re: Still Won't Cry
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 07:19:28 AM AEST
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This is so heartfelt and deep
Some people don't cry in front
of others, but just because you
cannot see them cry doesn't mean
that they don't. Great write.
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Still Won't Cry
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 08:03:20 AM AEST
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| Very touching poetry,most guys wont cry in front of some people,to answer your guestion he cries, just behind closed doors! Thats from my husband!!! Christina & Rob |
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Re: Still Won't Cry
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 09:37:10 AM AEST
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Awww...
so before i end my day, remember.....it all heals in time...
Ali |
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Re: Still Won't Cry
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by ginsdance on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:35:44 AM AEST
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This one is a heart breaker. I try to keep things locked up inside too, that's why I picked up writing... I wonder if he writes in secret to let go of the pain??? Great write! And I am sure, even if he doesn't cry, he would miss you greatly.
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Re: Still Won't Cry
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:08:27 PM AEST
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You convey perfectly feelings and emotions. You have a great friend. When you don't cry, the tears well up and fill your soul. Be there for him, ok?
Take care.
David |
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Re: Still Won't Cry
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:08:30 PM AEST
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You convey perfectly feelings and emotions. You have a great friend. When you don't cry, the tears well up and fill your soul. Be there for him, ok?
Take care.
David |
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