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Already a Victim
Contributed by
hurthurthurt
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:11:00 AM in AEST
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I'm trying to breathe, but I can't find the air.
I'm trying to run, but I'm getting no where.
I'm trying to smile, but produce a mere frown.
I lift my head up, but my eyes- they face down.
I'm shouting out loud, but nobody hears.
I'm trying to listen, but deaf are my ears.
I try to stay calm, but yell angry words.
I'm trying to heal, but still the wounds hurt.
I'm crying salt tears, but dry are my eyes.
I try to be true, but wear a disguise.
I'm trying to live, but I do not see.
Death has already made a victim of me.
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hurthurthurt
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2004-08-04 00:11:00]
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Re: Already a Victim
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by Stew on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:27:42 AM AEST
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| holly cow! i mean this is awesome, but i am hoping this isn't what you feel. it makes me so sad. it makes me stop and think if this is true or not. because i think everyone would be able to relate to this poem because doesn't death make everyone his victum? |
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Re: Already a Victim
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by kyletycz on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:30:04 AM AEST
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i liked this poem imensely, (my spelling stinks, and i doubt thats right(sorry)) but i think we all feel as if we wish we were one way, and never can be, we find ourselved in a lifelong contradtiction, lets just all face it, life is a female dog in heat, if you get my drift, but i liked this poem, and i wish you the best of luck in the future
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