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Radio
Contributed by
reilt
on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:50:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Sssssh it's speaking
A mouthless voice
Embodied in metal
Whispers neath
Shining silver
Choirs of angels sing
Sans a chorus
And motionless
I'm moved
What's this magic I'm hearing?
There's people in my house,
My room
Yet invisible
But for the equipment that equips them
To be everywhere
And all at once
Oh it's something
I'm sure I can't fathom
But I'll listen and listen because
Sssssh it's speaking
And I'm not leaving
Sure it's wireless
But I'm tied to the
Radio!
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-08-04 05:50:54]
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Re: Radio
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:20:13 AM AEST
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Very well-written.
I liked the opening lines.
I think you should have entered your poem in the competition.
It's good.
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Re: Radio
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by Ina on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:40:47 PM AEST
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haha. Shhh, dont tell anyone but this was really good. I love poems about objects and especially when they are quite humorous. now when ever i see my radio (cheap old thing) i feel this wire running from my ear to its speaker. eerie. loved it.
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Re: Radio
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by bobbyclay56 on
Sunday, 23rd October 2011 @ 07:34:59 AM AEST
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Short and simple I liked it.
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