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Lifetime Too Late
Contributed by
emeraldeyes
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:14:03 AM in AEST
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Livin' in the moment
We were livin' in a lie
Unworthy of my torment
Laughing as I cry
Livin' in a dreamland
Livin' in numbed pain
Taking hold of your hand
Caused scars that will remain
Livin' in the darkness
That creeps into my soul
Too blind to even notice
My hate for you has grown
Livin' for a future
Destroyed by the past
Bruises seem to fade away
But memories seem to last
Livin' in pure madness
Livin' for the hate
Your cry for redemption
A lifetime too late
Copyright ©
emeraldeyes
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2004-08-04 11:14:03]
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Re: Lifetime Too Late
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:28:48 AM AEST
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a very emotional write, great flow,
pixie xx |
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Re: Lifetime Too Late
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by anonymussme on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:39:49 PM AEST
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| awsome poem, it conveys the emotion without being to overpowering. wow, awsome.... |
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Re: Lifetime Too Late
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by punkprincess6689 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:14:46 PM AEST
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| good poem |
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