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This Demon, this pain
Contributed by
badboyzlover
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:16:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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This pain inside is like a demon,
Always haunting, always hurting me.
I know nothing can kill it,
I know nothing can hurt it.
Since this demon has entered me,
I've been searching for a hero,
To come and save me.
Someone strong and brave.
I've come to realize now,
That there is no hero, there's only me.
I need to be my own hero,
No ones going to save me.
I don't know if I'm strong enough,
To vanquish this demon.
How do you know
If your strong enough?
I know this demon is very strong,
I know I have a lot of pain inside.
I know that everyday the demon inside grows stronger,
More powerful,
More hurtful.
I want it to all go away,
I'm going to have to make it.
I'm going to have to be strong enough,
Even if I'm not.
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badboyzlover
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2004-08-04 12:16:14]
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Re: This Demon, this pain
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:21:07 PM AEST
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Great poem for your struggle within. Excellent write. Im glad you realized that it's you that can only stop it.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: This Demon, this pain
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by TBessant on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:29:50 PM AEST
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| Is the demon that you are struggling with a drug or love |
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Re: This Demon, this pain
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by TBessant on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:30:37 PM AEST
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| Is the demon that you are struggling with a drug or love |
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Re: This Demon, this pain
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by TBessant on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:32:35 PM AEST
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| Is the demon that you are struggling with a drug or love |
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Re: This Demon, this pain
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by TBessant on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:33:23 PM AEST
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| Is the demon that you are struggling with a drug or love |
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Re: This Demon, this pain
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by brew on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:35:00 PM AEST
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| Good write.............You do see the meaning of what needs to be done to make your life better. We all have demons, and we also........need to know that we have a beautiful and strong inner that can over power the bad and demon! |
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Re: This Demon, this pain
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by TBessant on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:38:02 PM AEST
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| Is the demon that you are struggling with a drug or love |
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Re: This Demon, this pain
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by punkprincess6689 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:08:26 PM AEST
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| this poem is good even if u think its not |
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Re: This Demon, this pain
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by punkprincess6689 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:08:48 PM AEST
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| this poem is good even if u think its not |
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Re: This Demon, this pain
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by BrandySwanson on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 08:12:36 PM AEST
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this was so good
Brandy |
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Re: This Demon, this pain
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by Dark_Cloud_ on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 03:29:20 PM AEST
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| That was a good write. And I dont think it needs any work at all. |
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Re: This Demon, this pain
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by White_Raven on
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| Very good poem. Hope you can win the battle agianst this demon inside. |
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