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The Beauty of Brokeness
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:36:36 PM in AEST
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There is a little girl who's hurting inside.
This little girl's lost all her pride.
She feels no care,
no trust,
no love.
She relies on her heavenly Father above.
Her hearts on fire,
in a flame it burns.
She gives love,
but recieves none in return.
She is scared.
Her hearts been torn,
ripped to shreds,
shattered to pieces,
burned to bits.
Her heart releases
nothing but lonliness;
nothing but pain.
She wonders if anyone
else is feeling the same.
Her heart is sore.
She can't take anymore.
She feels no care,
no trust,
no love.
She relies on her heavenly Father above.
She's really lonely, can't you see?
That this little girl is really me....
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Sirena_Degana
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2004-08-04 12:36:36]
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Re: The Beauty of Brokeness
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 11:10:25 AM AEST
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A very powerful write. I sence a strong desire to be wanted, needed, for someone to simply say, then show they care. I can relate. I bet most people can to some degree. It flows well and reads easily. It is full of emotion. I hope you can find that for which you seek. Need an ear ? I happen to have two ... and they still work. I listen well.
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Re: The Beauty of Brokeness
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:48:07 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem here..Strong words...
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Re: The Beauty of Brokeness
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by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 06:36:00 PM AEST
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OMG! Did u really write this, Meg?! Holy crap! It AWESOME! but dont feel lost, cuz i luv u, and so does QuImBy! Yay!
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Re: The Beauty of Brokeness
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by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 06:36:59 PM AEST
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OMG! Did u really write this, Meg?! Holy crap! It AWESOME! but dont feel lost, cuz i luv u, and so does QuImBy! Yay!
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