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Fear and Love
Contributed by
macgyver_dk
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:39:18 PM in AEST
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I close my eyes and I vision you,
I see you smile, and feel your soul float on through,
I feel you open the door to my heart,
You hold the key, you have since the start,
I allow myself to let you become near,
I have never felt this way before, Im paralyzied with fear,
I never knew love could be so intense,
I never thought my stomach could be so tense,
Since I met you I dont want to eat,
All I need is you and water, and your my sweet,
I stare into the sky,
And tears fill my seeking eyes,
I know that your faithfully mine,
But not being with you, I feel like I have died,
Im sitting here waiting for you,
The radios love songs make me think of me and you,
Staring into each others eyes,
You have turned my dark skys blue,
I ponder the question,
Do you really want me?
I know your answer is true,
Please come to me, cause without you , I dont know what i will do!!!!
Lets sail on the waters in our world,
let me take you places and show off my girl,
I will calm all the storms,
Our sailing will be still,
Baby, Im not confused,
But right now, I really need you,
You not being here by my side,
Makes my singing heart cry,
Ill be waiting for you,
Listen to the radio, I finally got through,
And in case I havent said it enough today,
Sweetie, I love you!!!!!!
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macgyver_dk
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Re: Fear and Love
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:41:23 PM AEST
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awwww this is really sweet, a lovely write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Fear and Love
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by HellsLibrarian on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:47:41 PM AEST
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| I really like this, it makes me think of how I feel about my boyfriend. |
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Re: Fear and Love
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:50:40 PM AEST
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What a great love "story". You expressed your love well in this poem. great write!
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Fear and Love
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by Sirena_Degana on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:55:19 PM AEST
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THE TRUE DESCRIPTION OF LOVE.....
this is so sweet...cute too...
blessed be!
sirena |
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Re: Fear and Love
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by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:56:18 PM AEST
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These are the words of love and how we all feel, we trust and give our very soul, and when its returned as we have given, no richer no fuller can we be.
I liked this poem much, thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Fear and Love
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by brew on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 01:29:49 PM AEST
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| Romantic, love, intense and soooooooo much more. But there is the ultima feeling ever, and the most scariest! Excellent write! |
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Re: Fear and Love
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 01:44:20 PM AEST
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| this was so sweet...and sweet isn't a word I've really ever used...great write, it was written very well...with love...Stalkee |
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Re: Fear and Love
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by punkprincess6689 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:05:26 PM AEST
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| i really liked that poem. good job |
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Re: Fear and Love
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by 01_zanzebar on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:21:46 PM AEST
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awh, i really enjoyed that, it stated a bit blah, but it soon picked up, a marvelous read, thanks for it :D you got quite a number of other happy ppl as well, lucky guy : )
well done
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Re: Fear and Love
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by Adelle on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 02:15:47 AM AEST
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I WISH SOMEONE WOULD WRITE A POEM LIKE THAT FOR ME:) CONGRADULATIONS ON YOUR NEW FOUND LOVE:)
A BEAUTIFUL POEM |
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