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Uncanny
Contributed by
Angela
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 01:26:35 PM in AEST
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there's only one song that ever made me cry.
and is it uncanny how whenever i cry, it's dark outside?
It's hard to confide in anyone when you're an outcast,
and you wouldnt want to anyway.
i know it makes you who you are,
i know it makes you try so hard,
to reach the stars that are out so far.
i'd love to tell you it doesnt worry me,
i'd love to say that i feel okay,
but its always been the truth when i state im not a liar.
i wouldnt mind spending all of my days,
standing outside with you in the pouring rain,
looking for the things that you've merely lost,
like when you were so kind.
we're having trouble finding all of those times.
its hard to subside where you're at right now,
when relationships feel like they're falling down.
and moments like these,
are the only things you can grab onto,
to keep from falling through,
to whats lying right infront of you.
Copyright ©
Angela
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2004-08-04 13:26:35]
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Re: Uncanny
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by slayer_015 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 01:38:25 PM AEST
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There is a lot of feeling in this poem.Great job.Keep writing.
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