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Life-long Nightmare
Contributed by
hooray_its_jen
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:15:54 PM in AEST
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Everything seems like a dream,
Or rather a life-long nightmare.
And nothing's gotten any better
As far as I'm aware.
I have an unexplainable feeling
That something isn't right,
Things are really different now,
I toss and turn at night.
No one really seems to care
What I think or feel,
The pain right now is just too deep.
My heart will never heal.
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Re: Life-long Nightmare
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:27:55 PM AEST
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| Oh sweetie, I do hope it does heal soon. Right now things are just in an upheaval and I know you are anxious. Once you are moved and start to school and make new friends I pray that things will start getting back to normal and you will be you again and the rest of the family will too. Love, Rita |
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Re: Life-long Nightmare
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by arden on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:34:08 PM AEST
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oh jenna again so sad... there was alot of emotion and pain expressed here.
I have an unexplainable feeling
That something isn't right,
Things are really different now,
I toss and turn at night.
really amazing lines in this poem.
it was so beautifully sad. love it girl.
if you ever need to talk then feel free to :)
5 stars
Becky |
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Re: Life-long Nightmare
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by CBlake on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 07:31:37 PM AEST
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| That was one of the best poems I have ever read... it was short, sweet, and meaningful. I can completely relate, too... friend problems... but I really hope your life gets better, and hopefully I made you feel a little better, for today anyway. |
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Re: Life-long Nightmare
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 09:24:28 PM AEST
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I do care Jenn and felt so much hurt in your poem.
I can't physically take it away and I have no magical wand but I would listen anytime. Please don't hesitate, anytime.
Keep writing and don't worry if it is your best.
Its from your core and that is all that matters and it really touched me.
Kie |
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Re: Life-long Nightmare
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:02:39 AM AEST
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when i read emotional work i always think better out than in. It's so good to write your feelings down as you have it gives your poem that rawness and power.
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Re: Life-long Nightmare
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by pixie on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:14:58 AM AEST
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Awwww Jen, I am so sorry for your pain, in time it will ease off, it is feeling very raw right now, but you have all us lot to dull the hurt and pain for you,
takecare
pixie xx
great write btw.. |
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