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No Other Way
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:56:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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No Other Way
You want me to be
Someone other than me
To be positive about things
I feed off negativity
There is no other way
That I can live
Anger pushes me on
From every dawn
Sorrow rages on
More each day
Sadness is what I keep
Nothing can change me
Each day I go on
Feeding off negativity
Where did your life get you?
You're telling other people what to do
Since when did you have the right to?
Being positive is useless to me
I live on to feed off negativity
And you're giving me enough to breathe
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Re: No Other Way
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by icee1116 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 09:29:19 PM AEST
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| i really like your style and i really enjoyed your poem it was really good |
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Re: No Other Way
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by TheVoice on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 09:37:02 PM AEST
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very strong write. i like it. just hope you have more good days than bad.
the voice
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Re: No Other Way
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by nexxa on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:10:52 AM AEST
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I love that last line it was perfect and how I feel at times believe it or not lol
Well done wee one .
Nexxa |
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Re: No Other Way
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by pixie on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:05:42 AM AEST
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great write ....I can relate, especially to the second stanza..
pixie xx |
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