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im going out of my mind
Contributed by
icee1116
on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 09:23:46 PM in AEST
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im going out of my mind
make it clear why draw it out
its not hard to do
you can write or you can say it
but please do something
im about to go insane
im going out of my mind
you said you loved me
you dont act it
you dont show it
make up your mind
im about to go insane
im going out of my mind
you told me to move on
but your still calling me
now your following me
what am i to do
im about to go insane
im going out of my mind
i got a call saying come quick
i knew something was wrong
i raced there with fear
when i got there i realized
your the one whose insane
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Re: im going out of my mind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 05:39:25 PM AEST
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i like the twist at the end! that's just awesome, you talk about yourself being insane, then you realize they're the one with the problem all along!!! i love it, truly amazing
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Re: im going out of my mind
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by ham323 on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 07:39:43 PM AEST
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| Pretty much sums up my relationships on the spot. Like the ending, well done. |
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