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Unwelcoming Reality
Contributed by
hurthurthurt
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:13:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I see the world more clearly now, and I hate what I see.
Everything is so ****** up, I know its not just me.
How did we let it get this bad, get so out of hand?
Im sure when god created us, this isnt what hed planned.
I look around, and everywhere, I see these people fight.
Each day theyre forced to live in hell, it simply isnt right.
See the little boy; in his hand you see a gun.
Im sure itd be quite different if the world could all be one.
Hear the little girl crying softly in the night.
The tears wont cease until her skin is turned from black to white.
See the battered mother, her husbands drunk again.
In her arms, she holds her son; dead at only ten.
Look at this girl, her life has been, torn away by rape.
Every day, another victim; there is no escape.
See the boy, just fifteen years, the gun held to his head.
Maybe now they will regret all the things theyve said.
Im trying hard to make it through, but I dont know what for.
I see this ****** up world and I dont wanna live no more.
I know I want to die now, my decision is quite clear.
Cos even if my life does change, this ****** up worlds still here.
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2004-08-05 00:13:55]
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Re: Unwelcoming Reality
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:52:07 AM AEST
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This is a really good poem, it does show the reality in things. I think i know exactly how you feel and i could really feel the emotions coming out of your work. Good write and keep it up. Feel free to have aread of some of my works as they are related.]
love always
corrupted_minds
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