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open a door
Contributed by
mlcarter369
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:19:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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people think they know me
but they really dont know
they judge by what they see
but theres more inside to show
see looks dont really matter
cuz they wont bring a smile
clothes you wear mean nothing
they just make a pile
when you get to know me
youll see theres a lot more
the clothes i wear the things i do
wont open up a door
i need you to care enough
and be the one to see
the door that u have closed
will be opened by me
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Re: open a door
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by olive on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:32:23 AM AEST
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| I like this poem a lot. It's true---people are always judging each other too soon. I especially like your last two lines. Very powerful. ~olive |
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Re: open a door
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:17:46 AM AEST
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Very goodd masterpeice here..If aa person iss lucky enuff to have one seee the inner side it's definently a blessing.
Great writing.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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