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I'm the one
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:41:49 AM in AEST
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All these years you've only glanced my way
But i'm the one that has to pay
You talk to loud
I'm the one that suffers in silence
And i've strived so hard to make you proud
But you don't want me here
I've run out of places to go and things to do
I have no tears left to cry
I'm waiting for life to pass me by
I'm the one that takes the pain from all you selfishness
But some how my death will not be your fault
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2004-08-05 02:41:49]
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Re: I'm the one
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:50:46 AM AEST
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Ireally don't know what's going on with your homelife but these are so sad.
Hang in there,, life can get better but it ssounds like u need someone that cares or maybe I'm getting the wong impression if so forgive me.
Life is worth living.
Keep wwriting tho as it certianly heelps.
Please exxccuse my ssttutering fingerss or key board which eva it it.
luv, huggss, faith, hope sstrength to livee,
emystar@msn.com |
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Re: I'm the one
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by pixie on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 04:55:48 AM AEST
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Awwww this poem is filled with sadness *hugs* a very powerful write indeed,
pixie xx |
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Re: I'm the one
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by inoc on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:56:31 AM AEST
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hoping eveything improves for you
once your father stops looking in HIS mirrror
he'll realise YOU are a son he's always
wanted
you sound such like a great son!
nicely written poem
coming from your heart
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