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bubblegum
Contributed by
chrissylee
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 03:19:22 AM in AEST
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I love to chew on bubblegum,
Each and everyday,
Blow the biggest bubble that you have ever seen.
All the colours of the rainbow,
Red, blue, yellow and green,
All the flavours and fruits,
Orange, strawberry, and mango i dream.
I chew my bubblegum real slowly,
To savour all the flavours,
Once its softened up enough,
I curl my tongue right in,
Poke it through that bubble gum,
Give a little blow,
Out comes a great big bubble,
Then suddenly it pops.
I love to blow bubbles with my bubblegum,
But the hardest thing of all,
Is picking all the gum off my face,
When the bubble was so darned huge.
Copyright ©
chrissylee
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2004-08-05 03:19:22]
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Re: bubblegum
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 04:58:02 AM AEST
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I gave five sstars aans he should get an A+
as you've done a professionaal for him.
Good work.
huggs, smiless-n-bubble gum,
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Re: bubblegum
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 10:00:29 PM AEST
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Chrissy Lee this was just as cute as it could be! My mother also used to write poems for me, and I was so proud to take them to school with me.
Bet he gets a really high mark on this one, how very kind of you write this for him. You must blow bubbles yourself.......how else.....could you know to write such a good poem? Not from not blowing Bubbles up on the shelve!
Good one
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Re: bubblegum
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:28:38 AM AEST
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Cute real Cute !
I enjoyed your poem, but hope your son wrote his own
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Re: bubblegum
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 10:02:22 AM AEST
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That was a cute write, you mentioned the colors of the rainbow and yet the colors you had where short for the rainbow.
Ignore me if i didnt make any sense (sorry). But i did enjoy the poem.
Jane
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