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Alone
Contributed by
Mr_Shadows
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 03:27:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The light goes out,
And Im alone.
Too scared to yell,
Too scared to phone.
( Now I Breathe )
The room is dark,
With dark comes cold.
I need a hand,
A hand to hold.
( Now I See )
Theres noone here,
There never was.
I look around,
I see these walls
( Now I Cry )
My pale green eyes,
Shed bloodstained tears,
Cause now I realise,
All my fears
I have no life,
I have no home,
Im an empty void,
And Im alone.
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Mr_Shadows
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2004-08-05 03:27:08]
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Re: Alone
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by Chrissylee on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 03:49:34 AM AEST
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| sad write but a realization that lots of us here have... nice write though |
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Re: Alone
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by Gothik_Twitch on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 03:56:28 AM AEST
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i like how you ryhme. I used to be able to rhyme but then i started to go into freeverse. neways enough about me. i love that poem cuz i can defnatly relate.
*hugs* your not alone. im here |
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Re: Alone
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by pixie on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 04:53:29 AM AEST
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a very great and dark write, good expression,
pixie xx |
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Re: Alone
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by Belinda on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:38:21 AM AEST
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Your poem made me tear up. It was completely moving, pulling me along in the darkness right beside you. Great write. I look forward to reading more from you.
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Re: Alone
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 07:10:02 AM AEST
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Very sad write but beautifully composed.
WinterFawn |
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Re: Alone
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by brew on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 08:01:09 AM AEST
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| Thats so sad........but we all have someplace, somewhere. I like the flowing words of this write, but sad! |
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