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the sea
Contributed by
karrie
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:18:15 AM in AEST
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why do i feel this sadness inside,
i look around me and see,
this wild wild sea..
the sorrow, and pain in the eyes of the people around me.
why are they here, why are they waiting..
the children, men and women what do they see,
standing and looking at this wild wild sea..
they stand for hours,
looking for what,
they see nothing,
the sea is barron,
this wild wild sea..
now i understand, the are waiting
waiting for their loved ones to return,
to return from this wild wild sea..
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Re: the sea
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:22:12 AM AEST
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good work written with compassion for others.
huggs, luv,
emy
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Re: the sea
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 08:32:57 AM AEST
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Warm welcome to YPDC... the best poetry site on the net...
Lovely poem about something that is close to my heart-- the sea. I have seen this happen many a times because of the fact that I live just across the street from the ocean... and you have written about so vividly.....
Thank you..
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Re: the sea
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 03:20:51 AM AEST
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Well done karen and welcome to the club, lol
I love poems about the sea, it is both beautiful and restless all at the same time
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Re: the sea
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 05:55:27 AM AEST
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I love the sea. It holds a power over me, although I expect nothing from it, exept the words it gives me to write.
A very nice piece.
Well done, and welcome to YPDC, althou I see that I am a bit late for that.
Take care.
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