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Silence
Contributed by
Belinda
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:35:44 AM in AEST
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She silently begs him
Talk to me
He loudly keeps silent
Copyright ©
Belinda
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2004-08-05 06:35:44]
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Re: Silence
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by inoc on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 07:02:20 AM AEST
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how true
doesn't that silence annoy the heck out of ya?
nice write ! |
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Re: Silence
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 07:11:50 AM AEST
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| Short, sharp and sweet. Nice write. |
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Re: Silence
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by pixie on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 07:26:50 AM AEST
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such a powerful haiku... I am sorry for the bad feeling between you and your husband, maybe you should write a poem on how you feel and give it to him to read... just a thought?
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Silence
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:38:38 PM AEST
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| not in haiku format, but good. |
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Re: Silence
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by girltranscended on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:38:57 PM AEST
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| The silent beg, I have witnessed this, but I guess, usually I am the too silent one. It can and does drive people mad. Although keep in mind people who can't talk it out often think it out at length. And it usually does not mean they don't care. |
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