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I'd Rather Be All Alone
Contributed by
emeraldeyes
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:31:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'd rather be all alone
than here in this * up home
If you want the truth, I'll lay it down
I'll be happier with you 6 ft underground
I'll tell you, life was better in a drug induced daze
than being here with you under your constant gaze
* your grace, forgiveness, the golden rule
you are fake- you left me in a bloody pool
Bleeding- cuts from your accusations
my pain bringing you gratification
So, why did you bring me here? to see the tattered frame
of your daughter, your sister- you call insane
Just because I chose to live for me
I became the enemy instinctively
You stomped on me while my mind was frail
you took all I had to love...true betrayal...
You can have my money, and pretty things
but you NEVER had Dad- or my dreams
I am leaving now, the bridge- it fell
you can all go to hell
* this place you call home
I'd rather be all alone
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emeraldeyes
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2004-08-05 12:31:50]
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Re: I'd Rather Be All Alone
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by pixie on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:35:23 PM AEST
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very sad poem, that you feel that upset and angry that you would rather be on your own, *hugs*
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Re: I'd Rather Be All Alone
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:41:37 PM AEST
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| This truely is a work born of pain. i hope this is an old poem and you have gotten past this hatred. i know what it is to be angry but please don't let it consume you. |
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Re: I'd Rather Be All Alone
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by zenmind on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:42:21 PM AEST
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one word....powerful
'you left me in a bloody pool bleeding--cuts from your acccusations'
I felt that
Be True,
zenmind
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