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can you help me? (stevie)

Contributed by eternityandaday4u on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:28:21 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



where is this place you call darkness?
please can you help me? save me from myself!!
the walls i have frantically built to hide my pain
the facade i so painstakingly created to sheild
me from your game.
your everlasting pretending game.
my heart is naked an numb where you were.
how do i get out of here? PLEASE HELP ME!!!
stop cryng! please stop crying! i can't stop crying!!
in your shadow again stuck in your dream
the demons ripping at my flesh to my beating heart.
i wake up and paint my smile.
i paint my mask.
the only thing that stands between me and the beast!
my pain slowly turns into anger
i yell at yu agin but you don't care.
STEVIE ARE YOU LISTENING?
please listen to what i am not saying
you try to help me but i bawl helplessly in the corner
reminising all the memories.
the memories turn black!
i hate you so much yet i love even more!
i need you please come back.
a footstep in the shadows again
darkness is creeping it lurking within
where is this place you call darkness?
CAN YOU HELP ME?




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Re: can you help me? (stevie) (User Rating: 1 )
by desireemiote on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 09:12:07 PM AEST
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wooah! this is a very personal poem...i'm so glad you were brave enough to share it with us here on this site
luv sushi


Re: can you help me? (stevie) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 06:07:08 AM AEST
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Very touching and emotional write....
Best of luck.
Jenni




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