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Suicidal Love
Contributed by
Oriana
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:36:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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This love I feel for you still drives me insane.
All the longing, hoping, wishing and praying I did.
Didn't effect you at all.
I want you back in my life and as the crimson flows down my arms.
I think in my drugged up mind,"Was it worth it? Is it worth it to still love you?"
You've kept the only other thing I loved away from me and do you know what that is baby?
MY CHILD
"This," my mind screams as my shaky hand writes this and the other reaches for my vodka "this is what is truly driving me insane."
You said you love me once. You said you loved me enough to be the mother of my children.
Now I sit here in silence watching my blood fall to the floor reminding me of all the tears I've cried.
Copyright ©
Oriana
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2004-08-05 14:36:35]
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Re: Suicidal Love
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 04:33:40 PM AEST
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| SOOOO SAD HOPE YOU GET TO SEE YOUR BABY SOON |
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Re: Suicidal Love
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 09:51:54 PM AEST
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That is awesome. What a great first submission! I'm impressed. Vivid imagery and emotion. I think anguish is the word I'm looking for here. It comes across strongly in your words. Great job, I'll be keeping my eye out for more from you!
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Re: Suicidal Love
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 01:36:53 PM AEST
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Very powerful, thought provoking words. Well done.
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Re: Suicidal Love
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:34:43 PM AEST
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Very, very sad. I hope things look up for you.
Blessings
Andrew |
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