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One last Journey
Contributed by
mrpeanut64
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:59:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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What lies beyond that final step
What mysteries await
What secrets stand beyond the door
When my life I take
Is it as the Christians teach
of paradise and hell
Or as the atheist believe
Only one way to tell
As Columbus did in days of old
To explore the great unknown
But no Nina, Pinta or Santa Maria
For this I do Alone
Please dont grieve or shed a tear
Of sadness do not partake
Place no blame and feel no guilt
The decision was mine to make
And if by chance you think of me
As the years unfold
I hope you smile with fond remembrance
And close to your heart those hold
Copyright ©
mrpeanut64
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2004-08-05 14:59:01]
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Re: One last Journey
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 03:40:26 PM AEST
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I love the rhyme and flow of this verse. To lose someone that you love deeply can bring about all these emotions and feelings. You have expressed those emotions beautifully in this piece.
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Re: One last Journey
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 04:26:12 PM AEST
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| Brilliantly put- great writing- I'm glad you didnt go through with it- it would have been such a shame to lose such a talented writer |
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Re: One last Journey
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:18:30 AM AEST
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MrPeanut, ..... Wow! I am speachless.
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