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Sinking
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:13:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Help me find my way
tell me how you feel
I hate waiting
to see if I can talk to you today
We're so far apart
I can't stand not seeing your face
I hope to see it again soon
I don't even know where to start
Whenever I saw you I felt tingles
we were like magnets
we couldn't stay away from each other
now your giving me mixed signals
hopefully, time will tell where things lead
I want to know what to think
because I just don't know what to do
I don't even know what I need
Things need to go some where from here
because I can't leave things how they are
things are just way to confusing
They aren't how they appear
I'm not as happy as I look
I have things buried deep inside
unknown feelings, unknown thoughts
you have no idea the effort it took
I need to know what your thinking
because you are the only thing on my mind
where should i go from here
because all I have been doing is sinking
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MnMnMsrcool
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2004-08-05 17:13:58]
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Re: Sinking
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by gery_giggles on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:46:42 PM AEST
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lots of emotion in this poem.its great to write a different way....good job!
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