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Pray For Peace, 911-September 11, 2001
Contributed by
SunshineBees
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Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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You, there and I'm here...
Even though I'm not in your World,
I can feel how you feel...
I can imagine how it happened...
Its so depressing, devastating...horrifying...
How can someone do this to human beings?...
How life can turn into a mishap?...
I wish that I could turn back the clock for you...
Losing your loved one.. I understand perfectly how u feel..
Its difficult but I guess.. God love them the most...
Let us close our eyes, hold our hands, pray together...
Whatever race, religion, u might be...
We pray to ONE GOD....
Lets us wish for the best...
Let us wish nothing will happen to the rest...
I wish for Peace, Love, Harmony in our World..
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2002-10-30 10:00:00]
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Re: Pray For Peace, 911-September 11, 2001
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by PlayItForward on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:07:28 AM AEST
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| good intention but a crappy read. No flow. no rhyme scheme. Im sorry but i dont think this is a great poem, its just a bunch of scentences thrown together with a "DEEP" meening. Dont get discouraged, but work on showing some skill. |
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Re: Pray For Peace, 911-September 11, 2001
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 05:16:15 AM AEST
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| beautiful write, came from your heart, don't let anyone take that from you, thanks for sharing, peace be with you, |
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