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My Heart is Somewhere...
Contributed by
stalkee
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 09:20:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Take my heart out
Now, smash it well
And look what's inside
Things I can't now hide
Look through my eyes
And see good times
They're still walking here,
still full of good cheer
Stay here with me
Let's freeze our lives like this
Let me show you my self
Give me once more
What has turned to ashes,
let's turn back into flames
Listen to me
And all my songs
Of spells begun
'cause you're no one
Mixed and matched now
More than ever
I'm feeling these things,
But what does it mean?
I'm breaking up
And staring at stars
They remind me
Of all the time lost
I'm losing sleep,
'cause I'm so in love
Copyright ©
stalkee
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2004-08-05 21:20:14]
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Re: My Heart is Somewhere...
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by Stew on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:17:10 PM AEST
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i like this poem, especially the last verse. it made me feel... i don't know, but i made me feel something. Please read some of mine.
Love forever
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Re: My Heart is Somewhere...
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by venkat on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 02:35:32 AM AEST
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| Strikingly beautiful..yearning and anguish both are well painted...venkat |
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Re: My Heart is Somewhere...
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by Stitch on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 07:03:09 AM AEST
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So much good stuff here. The good times still walking here---I love that line especially.
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