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My Perfect World
Contributed by
Witch
on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 01:00:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Ive lived in this perfect world of mine for centuries
Or maybe since the beginning of time
Its my perfect world where hunger does not exist
And flowers never cease to bloom
A world with endless grass mountains
And blues skies all the way
Ive lives in this perfect world of mine for centuries
Or maybe since the beginning of time
Its my perfect world where everybody is something like human
Where lies break hearts
And smiles bring joy
Where walking barefoot in the beach is every girls dreams
And a womans anatomy is every boys fantasy
Ive lived in this perfect world of mine for centuries
Or maybe since the beginning of time
Its my perfect world where I am of no use
And deceptions are all that one looks forward to
My world where hope is traded with sorrow
And sorrow traded with lies
With grief
With suicide
With death
Ive lived in this perfect world of mine for centuries
Or maybe since the beginning of time
Its my perfect world trapped in the nothingness of life
Of a life filled with nothing at all
A life that follows the trail to disaster
This is my perfect world
The world where you and I come from
We will live in it for many centuries
Or maybe until the end of time
This Is Our Perfect World
Copyright ©
Witch
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2004-08-06 01:00:52]
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Re: My Perfect World
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 01:06:07 AM AEST
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| interesting view. |
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Re: My Perfect World
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:48:13 AM AEST
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| I can really relate to this, I love my own little world though it can;t block out everything...superb write. |
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Re: My Perfect World
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by x_midnight_x on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:50:03 AM AEST
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| awww i dont want it to be our perfect world..its just too awful to imagine and makes me feel unity and need a hug instead of another kick in the teeth for still surviving..i felt the grime and blackness without time..as i read on,i loved it you should send it out again i bet it will bring further comments once its unleashed,fantastic keep writing x |
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