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There Once Was a Girl From Saskatchewan...
Contributed by
Stoney1
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:25:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
limericks
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There once was a party-goer from Saskatchewan
Couldn't decide which coat, or hat to put on
So she dyed her hair black,
Painted a white stripe down her back,
And ate beans, to make herself flatulant,
- then went to the party as a skunk.
Here's another:
There once was a man named Mike
Who professed he'd once dated a dike,
When asked how it went,
He allowed she'd left him half spent,
And she also tied a knot in his spike.
Stoney
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Stoney1
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2004-08-06 10:25:01]
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Re: There Once Was a Girl From Saskatchewan...
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:36:03 AM AEST
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I liked the idea of the first one but you lost rhythm at the end with "skunk"
Saskatchewan
on - this part is good...
skunk?
the last word is supposed to rhyme with on or Saskatchewan
Hope you don't mind my constructive criticism
The second one is really good...
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Re: There Once Was a Girl From Saskatchewan...
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by Stoney1 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:57:21 AM AEST
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I was going for the humour rather than worrying about
the purity of the limerick itself.*g*
But no, I don't mind the correction.
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