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Fool
Contributed by
goya
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:41:06 PM in AEST
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Fool
He put his arms around my waist,
I look at him, I feel embraced
His tracking hands, my shirt unlaced,
Oh what a shame, oh what a waste.
I used him once, I used him twice,
That was fun but at what price?
Hotblooded stares that melt the ice,
My darkened gaze, will that suffice?
He now knows how he was played,
Knows I broke all the promises I made,
Crushed my heart that infront of him I layed,
Let's me perish, linger here and fade.
My punishment was rather cruel,
Yet I know I acted like a fool.
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Re: Fool
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by loopylou on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 01:46:39 PM AEST
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| ouch this is rough hope things get better suppose this poem represents the whole you live and learn process i thought you described it well |
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