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Moonlight Shines
Contributed by
Oriana
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:44:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The moonlight starts to shine and the stars twinkle as I ready myself for bed.
Sighing to myself I change into my night clothes and turn staring at my bed almost longinly
Wishing you were here with me, wrapping your arms around so I can feel safe knowing your here with me at last.
I climb into bed and close my eyes curling up around my pillow knowing that when the sun shines through my window.
I`ll awaken from another wishful dream.
Copyright ©
Oriana
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2004-08-06 12:44:36]
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Re: Moonlight Shines
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by pixie on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 01:30:58 PM AEST
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beautfiful poem well written
pixie xx |
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Re: Moonlight Shines
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 02:36:45 PM AEST
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Nice wistful piece. Well done!
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Re: Moonlight Shines
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by brew on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 03:53:09 PM AEST
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| Seems love .......has taken and now you cant give! Sad, but beautiful write! Deep and thoughful dreaming or wishing! |
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Re: Moonlight Shines
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 08:45:49 PM AEST
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So sweet up until the end.... when it gets sad... lol. Oh well, it's certainly not the worst feeling in the world. Lovely piece of work.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Moonlight Shines
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:05:13 PM AEST
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Lovely bit of writing......enjoyed this..
Welcome to YPDC.....
Jenni |
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Re: Moonlight Shines
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by Aquaelius on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 08:44:34 PM AEST
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Very touching... I wonder what kind of "night clothes" you wearing? Is it lacy?
Good write.
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