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Hurting
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
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People told me that I would have to watch my back with you
They told me that when I had my back turned you would stab a knife into it
I never wanted to believe them
He is just hurting I told them
When you first hurt me I just told myself he is just hurting
Hes just hurting he doesnt know what he is doing
All the pain and worry that he causes me
He is just hurting
Getting out anger that he doesnt know how to control
I stood up for you countless times
Putting my friendship with others on the line
I was always there for you or so I thought
I fought for you when no one else did
When no one else was there I was lending an ear
Now youre trying so hard at pushing me away
And it is ripping me apart
I keep trying to reach out to you
But you push even harder
This time I am not going to fail a friend
I will press back
I will hold you even when you yell and scream and hit and bite
For deep down I dont think you want to lose me
I can see it deep down in your eyes
I will stay strong I will fight for you
You may beat me down but I will get up again
I will not let you push me away
I will stay close to you
I will hold you when you cry
I love you and I know that you love me to
You are just confused
And hurting
Or is that just my heart making up excuses for you hurting me
I dont want to lose you
I will not lose you
I refuse to give up on you
I love you too much to let you go
Please listen to my plea
I cant bear to lose you
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2002-10-30 11:00:00]
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Re: Hurting
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:13:16 AM AEST
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Beautifully written
but be careful how much
you give, that you dont end
up being used and abused
and so drained in the end
that you have no strength
to give anything to anyone
else in your life, I have been
down this road. Be careful
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Hurting
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 11:33:42 AM AEST
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Lovely poem...and I tend to agree with OreO..
Jenni |
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Re: Hurting
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 12:49:13 PM AEST
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HI,LIL-ANGEL
THIS IS VERY GOOD,KEEP IT UP.
R.C. |
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Re: Hurting
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by rockshv on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:05:04 PM AEST
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i agree with oreo... and i also have been in a similar position ...
nice work |
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Re: Hurting
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by capergirl_23 on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:44:42 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. But I do agree with a few of the others. I have been down this road also. And sometimes the best thing to do is let go. Like the old saying goes. If it is meant to be they will come back to you. So stay strong, & stay safe. |
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Re: Hurting
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by Fiona on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:43:13 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem, you sound like you are someone with a lot of strength and good character. All my love to you hun. *Fiona* |
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