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Learning to Love
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 06:37:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I couldn't have been
Much past seventeen
When I met a girl
She completed my world
She was the answer to my every dream
She was like a part of me I never knew was gone
Everything I thought was right
Suddenly seemed oh, so wrong
Until she took me by the hand
And helped me understand
And I guess you could say I was yearning
And I guess you could say I was burning
And I guess you could say I was learning ~ to love
And then ...
We could have been
Subjects of a Shakespeare play
We shared the same soul
We could never grow old
I can still recall the day
She said " I could never care for someone
More than I do you
Untill I met another and somehow the feelings grew"
Then she took me by the hand
Tried to help me understand
And I guess you could say I was yearning
And I guess you could say I was burning
And I guess you could say I was learning ~ to love
Just then
Time moves on
She's long since gone
But she left behind
Where I still find her
Memory
And I guess you could say I'm still yearning
And I guess you could say I'm still burning
And I guess you could say I'm still learning ~
To Love
Again
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2004-08-06 18:37:21]
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Re: Learning to Love
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by Stew on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 08:05:00 PM AEST
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i really like this poem because i and everyone else can relate to it. everyone has their time when the learn to love. please read some of mine. i hope you like them.
love forever
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Re: Learning to Love
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by venkat on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 05:50:40 AM AEST
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| I agree with the comment of stew..many can relare..Beautifully written..keep'em coming on. venkat |
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Re: Learning to Love
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by Oriana on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 01:42:30 PM AEST
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| I could write something poetic right now....but it wouldn't make much sense.. When I try nothing comes when I don't I have a flood of ideas. Exallent write.... Oriana |
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Re: Learning to Love
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by luckycharm on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 05:52:11 PM AEST
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| I understand exactly how you feel. You have expressed your feelings good throughout your poem and continue to write. You have a very unique style in your writing.-luckycharm. |
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Re: Learning to Love
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by FleurdeSang on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:06:57 PM AEST
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Dearest poet, this is so far the most beautiful proclaimation of love I have read!! Gorgeously written, and enchanting flow! However, I am filled with sorrow, for "she" left you in the undying grasp of Anguish... I know this feeling of finally recieving something that seems so perfect, so incredibly beautiful, and then it is stolen from you... Love gives us bliss and a sense of being loved/wanted, and yet, it gives us unbearable pain to endure after a seperation... She shall forever be in the depths of your memories and heart, but you want someone to be there now, to embrace you, to fill that vast void where your heart used to be... You long for someone to teach you the mysteries of love once more, as we all do... May that teacher of love enter your world, and rid you of all the darkness that is in your precious heart... Once again, enthralling write, heartwrenching... I extremely enjoyed this piece! Thank you for revealing your soul to me again. I can percieve it all day, till time ceases... All my love, precious Scott! I await for your next exhilirating submission! Eternally yours,
Votre precieux Fleur |
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Re: Learning to Love
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 03:45:19 PM AEST
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*doesn't know what to say*
I could say I agree with everyone else, because I do. But for some reason that doesn't seem enough.
Great write hun, but so very sad. Maybe this is something everyone has to go through.
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Re: Learning to Love
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:30:00 AM AEST
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The first stanza hits the nail right on the head. I guess we all get our heart broken eventually and a bit of that pain never goes away. It's like a dormant virus just waiting for a weakness to set it ablaze again. Ranting here again. Sorry. Nice stuff.
Impressed again.
Stitch |
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