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You dont know me
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:48:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You dont know me, you dont know who I am,
You wouldnt understand youre just like other men,
If only you knew how it feels to be me,
Than maybe little boy you might try to see,
I hurt from the present, I hurt from the past,
What ever love did was always last,
One man has had my love, his never let it go,
By saying you were a craze your saying Im a ho,
And if its that is truth then why live life?
Your making me lure right to the knife,
By saying these words you may feel free,
But did you ever think how theyd effect me?
Unsure of whether to call me friend, then do not,
Our friendship always was beginning to rot,
You cant expect me to love you,
Unless I lie it would be true,
I dont believe in love at first sight,
Its made over time, not made over night,
You think you know pain, youve never died,
Ive been to hell and back and still survived,
You think you know pain, try pick up a blade,
In the darkness its night, there is no shade,
Ive bled for what lifes done to me,
You cant judge only on what you see,
You think everything I do is just a show,
How ***** long did it take to know?
Im a messed up freak, its nothing to bask,
So why do you think that I put on a mask,
I sometimes think Id better off forlorn,
But someone like you would be happy Im gone,
Illusions they fool, not a person or heart,
From beginning to end nowhere to start,
Id never regret the blood that let run,
Or maybe you rather me use daddies old gun,
Words youve spoken brought me great sorrow,
Think hard now will you see me tomorrow?
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2004-08-07 03:48:16]
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Re: You dont know me
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by Dizza_13 on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:59:24 AM AEST
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sad.....i'm always here 4 you if you need to talk loretta.
Dizza
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Re: You dont know me
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:15:21 AM AEST
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It's got quite a few speeling errors in it. it's a good poem, very sad though!
where you've put
"Illusions they fool, not a person or heart,
From beginning to end nowhere to start,
I’d never regret the blood that let run,
Or maybe you rather me use daddies old gun,
Words you’ve spoken brought me great sorrow,
Think hard now will you see me tomorrow?"
i think that was the best part of the poem.
it was ended very well indeed!
... but please don't end your life!
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Re: You dont know me
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by cj_ranson on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:19:30 AM AEST
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mmm, i dont know what too say, just know were here for u always,
Cj
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Re: You dont know me
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by venkat on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:24:47 AM AEST
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| So sad..pl. don't use any gun. venkat |
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Re: You dont know me
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by badboyzlover on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:53:21 PM AEST
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| I love this poem very much it is very sad. And the pain you talked about many people have felt it. I hope all the people you love will always see you tomorrow. If you ever need to talk I'm here for you as of many others. |
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Re: You dont know me
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:50:17 PM AEST
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Sad. But still awesome poem.
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