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shadow
Contributed by
hannahbanana
on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 12:21:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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just a shadow
following about
time has spun its web
and we're trapped
in a neverending cycle
shades of light and dark
you and me
staying one step behind
always watching from that distance
how you waltz
and ease and breathe
while i'm still cathing mine
in a meagre attempt
to climb a ladder
that looses rungs
each time i try
landing smack bang again
in your shadow
and wishing
just wishing
to one day catch up
and merge.
Copyright ©
hannahbanana
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2004-08-07 12:21:58]
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Re: shadow
(User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:01:22 PM AEST
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You REALLY wanna know what I think.......
Well I loved it! It was very unique and I think perhaps I got the meaning right and if I did, I think I can relate. Great job!
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