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i,d scream these words rite in your face if only you were here
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
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Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 01:56:32 PM in AEST
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all these wounds you have inflicted upon this abused and broken body
seemed to have bled for eternity i,m in unbarable agony
all those words you screamed at me never go away
i cannot close my eyes in fear of seeing your face
these wounds those words your face i,m cursed
i am bound and broken for eternity
i think these four walls are closing in on me
wipe away the blood from my skin but it seems to stain with scars
clench my fists as i slice into my skin
all this is for you
i would scream these words right in your face if you were here
all these fears and my useless existence
i am alive for you
i am here wishing that you would tell your daughter you love her again
put down the broken glass and open your eyes
your killing the person i once knew
the person inside
as my blood drips and and my woundas are aching you still are not here
bound fro eternity
i,ll be waiting.
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Re: i,d scream these words rite in your face if only you were here
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 02:04:43 PM AEST
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Wow, this is very deep. I'm sorry. A friend of mine told me that if you hurt yourself, you are letting the other person win, you're agony is their victory. It sounds like this poem was about your mother. I understand how you feel. My mother and I aren't too close, but try and talk to her. Perhaps she doesn't realize what she's doing to you. Best of luck!
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Re: i,d scream these words rite in your face if only you were here
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by Twitch06 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 05:27:07 PM AEST
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sorry that i havent commented on any of ur poems, i really havent had a computer for a while.
But anyways. i really like this poem. i like it cause i almost feel the same way towards people in general and people that just really tick me off. But this is really a great poem, with all your emotions put together, u have a strong heart, but also a brused one. i am really sorry for all your conflicts, which i really dont know what they are, but i can really convey them to myself. Have luck with everything that you do.
~Kristen |
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