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Golden Child
Contributed by
playitforward
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Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I've been trying hard to smile
and to keep an open mind
I've been trying hard to walk the path
that no one else can find
There is no map to follow
I must travel on my own
There's no one here to guide me
and i am scared to be alone.
My friends have found a trail,
more convienent than my quest.
So I sacrifice my precious time,
to be like all the rest.
I hold your wisdom in the dark
to help me find my way
from the light i must embark
to earn my right to play.
Not one lesson was forsaken
dateing back to birth.
The Golden Child will awaken
soon, to change the Earth
Copyright ©
playitforward
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2002-10-30 15:00:00]
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Re: Golden Child
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 03:07:37 PM AEST
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Beautiful write
i really enjoyed this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Golden Child
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by horseluver on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 03:12:55 PM AEST
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| I really loved it-very inspirational. Your use of rhyme flowed nicely and I really love your thoughts on going about life~right on. Keep writing! I look forward to more of your poems in the future! lotsa luck! ~Jess |
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Re: Golden Child
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 09:26:26 PM AEST
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G'day Playitforward,
This is a good write, I enjoyed it very much
looking forward to more..
Fwog |
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Re: Golden Child
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:17:23 AM AEST
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| I hope your mothers right (in changing the world that is) Good write!Christina |
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Re: Golden Child
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 11:49:57 PM AEST
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playitforward,
This is beautiful... so inspirational... thanks for writing this and sharing... =;)
Daniela |
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Re: Golden Child
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 06:48:36 PM AEST
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| beautifully worded, what a wonderful way to travel, thanks for sharing this gift, its all part of your walk, |
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