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In the car
Contributed by
Kirby
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Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:31:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Laying there warm in your arms
After all was said and done
I've never been so happy
I've never felt so free.
We spole no words for awhile
But the silence did not bother me.
I just kissed your shoulder and neck softly.
Lost in the surrealism you put me in.
I felt it in your kiss that you wan more.
We're not just friends with benafits.
That's just a cover up so we don't get hurt.
If I wasn't moving in a month, I'd be your forever.
I've got your t-shirt to sleep with.
Imagining you next to me will do for now.
Until the next time when we dance again.
You made me feel like a woman today.
And for sure, you walked away a new man.
Copyright ©
Kirby
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2004-08-07 15:31:06]
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Re: In the car
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by Katie2008 on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:54:22 PM AEST
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This poem was cute. I always think it's a good idea to draw lines in relationships such as the one you wrote about. Friends with benefits almost always turns out to be not beneficial at all in the long run. Nice write
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