|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Only One
Contributed by
Hakiokusaken
on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:40:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
|
My life is in torment
Pulled in so many directions
Its like my spirit is dorment
It seems I get no attention
Until my heart turned golden
By Gods good graces
To share this moment
with all colors and races
I am a warrior
In true uniform
As Jesus my savior
I come to inform
Copyright ©
Hakiokusaken
... [
2004-08-07 16:40:49]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Only One
(User Rating: 1 )
by Luka on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:31:33 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I am not a relgious person at all, infact most of the time i doubt that there really is even a higher power, but after reading this poem it makes you think. what if god is really there? anyway i feel the length of a poem dosent mean anything its the poiny your trying to get across you got your point across in this short poem and thats all you need to do good job 4 stars |
|
|
Re: Only One
(User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 06:06:05 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I too am not a religious person but you have done a fine job on this poem. Keep up the good work
corrupted_minds |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
