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Your Job
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 11:45:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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She was walking all alone
it was after dark
Not very intelligent
to be alone in the park
A couple passed her by
paying little attention to her
But she noticed something strange
and wondered who they were
Something was not right
so she turned and went their way
They moved behind a bush
she thought they went to play
All of a sudden she heard a scream
what was there to do
Should she go and try to help
would he wind up attacking you
To you it did not matter
you had no other choice
You took the gun from your purse
if he did not head your voice
Thank God he ran away
when he looked up at the gun
Once more you had done you job
another battle won
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-08-07 23:45:43]
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Re: Your Job
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by tlhInganHom on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:40:50 AM AEST
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I like the idea, though I was backwardly hoping she'd get mauled... ;-)
The only criticism I have is that the subject of the poem isn't always clear, especially in the last three stanzas.
Otherwise, nice :-) |
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Re: Your Job
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by thumper on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:58:10 AM AEST
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Cool. :o) I like happy endings. Good rhythm and storyline.
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Your Job
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by Stew on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 03:20:24 PM AEST
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i really like this poem. i wish there was actually someone like this young lady. this poem really touches the heart.
love forever
stew |
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