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I'm too late ...
Contributed by
Mr_Shadows
on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:32:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Slowly i walk along this path before me,
laced with blood and lost loves ..
Past the cracked cement and the roses,
that have decayed from stem to buds ..
I feel as though im in the box again,
just dark walls and silence,
no visible signs of life .....
Finally i reach my goal, my angel,
lying upon a bed of rusted razors,
Surrounded by a glowing light ...
Too late, "no not again", too late,
my box is freezing over now,
covering my essence as it drips,
from my eyes ...
Trapped, Imprisoned, Forgotten,
and filled with grief ..
the worst thing of all is knowing,
noone will hear my cries ...
Copyright ©
Mr_Shadows
... [
2004-08-08 00:32:07]
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Re: I'm too late ...
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by emystar on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:47:49 AM AEST
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Sad but I hear ya loud-n-clear.
Awesomely said.
Good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: I'm too late ...
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:49:54 AM AEST
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| fantastic write. dont blame yourself, if they couldnt save themselves no one could. |
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