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Who I Am
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:49:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Look into my tired eyes
Can you see my soul, and how it cries
Every night I sit there crying
From the inside out Im slowly dying
I cut to let the death slip out
That is something I cant live without
If I didnt cut my cold lifeless skin
All my pain would just stay within
This way I might live longer
And maybe I will even get stronger
I know everyone thinks that is so bad
But they just dont understand that Im always sad
I have to say I have been living a lie
Im sorry that I made you cry
But who you see just isnt me
The real me, I dont know if youll ever see
I wish I could just show you who I am
But I know you will mistake it for a sham
Because it is not the person that you know
So I dont think I can ever let the real me show
So I think Ill just keep living this lie
Even though it makes me cry
Its like its just one big game
To everyone else the real me would just be a shame
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Re: Who I Am
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by RavenShadows on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:01:27 AM AEST
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| This is sad, but I can totally relate. I am not a cutter, but my sister who recently passed away was. No one understood why she did it, no one really ever understood who she really was, as she didnt want anyone to see. She never let anyone in. I hope this doesnt happen to anyone else. Its just so hard to deal with. Great write. |
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Re: Who I Am
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by emystar on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:16:32 AM AEST
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The poem is really sad but wriiten well.
I'm sorry 'bout your sister.
to the author these writes break my heart as I wouldn't begin to know how to help u but my heart crys for you.
I will never pretend to understand this but it's even more sad that u feel so down that u think it's the only way. Please try to get help somehow 'cause your life is just as importent as anyone elses.
Still it's very good witing tho.
huggs, luv, prayer, faith, hope,
emy |
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Re: Who I Am
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:54:37 AM AEST
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| CT, this is an emotionally draining poem, even though it's very sad I was hooked from line one...I believe that you're worth far more than you suppose even though I don't know you. It's a long and winding road, they say, and who knows what lies beyond it? |
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Re: Who I Am
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by corrupted_minds on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 05:56:41 AM AEST
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Thanks for writing this poem, if this is what you produce when you have a writers work your other work must be out of this world. I can really feel the emotions inside, i know how you feel. I have cut myself before, i try to think now i have somethng to live for but sometimes it's hard to convince myself this. PLease keep safe.
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