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This Is The Way
Contributed by
The_Angel_Of_Darkness
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Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:10:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Bringing tears, and spreading fear,
I am the one who brings crimson cheer.
Take my hand, and walk this land,
Walking through the warmth of the sand.
Take a chance, and invite a mortal to dance.
Take your bite,
And lift their souls from their heavenly lives.
Then show them the way,
To where darkness likes to play.
Bring them to the life of darkness,
For all eternity.
For this is the way, it was meant to be.
This is the life of crimson,
Made for you and me.
Copyright ©
The_Angel_Of_Darkness
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2004-08-08 01:10:20]
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Re: This Is The Way
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by RavenShadows on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:14:33 AM AEST
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| This is a good one also, even though it seems that you may be over using the word "crimson" a little bit. |
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Re: This Is The Way
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:27:27 AM AEST
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| i agree with shadow, but sometimes being redundant cant be helped. great write thats well paced. |
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Re: This Is The Way
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:59:49 AM AEST
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I like it
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