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yet alone
Contributed by
SocialMisfit
on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:29:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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to have
many friends
what a wonderful
feeling
yet i am
so alone
empty inside
such despair
this empty soul
with so much love
to give away
to give to someone
to make others
to be happy
but i remain
yet alone
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2004-08-08 01:29:34]
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Re: yet alone
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by tlhInganHom on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:33:44 AM AEST
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| I hope you can forgive me for saying so, but this poem seems sort of clichéd and... shallow. |
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Re: yet alone
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by RavenShadows on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:53:59 AM AEST
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| I thought it was pretty good. Short and to the point with just a hint of scared dispair behind the words. |
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Re: yet alone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:10:40 AM AEST
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Worthy of respect. If depth is in question, then it demands more appreciation of other works of this poet.
Well done, SMF. |
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