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I Infect Your Soul
Contributed by
RavenShadows
on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:32:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My darkness fades from view
And enters deep into you
I infect your soul
Let my darkness swallow you whole
You are part of my dreams
I am the precursor to your screams
I engulf your spirit
I take you to the limit
Taking you over the edge
Leaving you dangle on the ledge
To jump and to die
Go on, pretend you can fly
Let me watch you fall to the ground
I will watch with joy unbound
Let me take away your life
Here take my sharpened knife
End it all
And beware the fall
Deep down into my dark black hole
I am the keeper of your poor lost soul
Come join with me
Embrace me
Clutch me to your breast
Let my dark magic do the rest
We are the terrors that fly in the night
There is no point in putting up a fight
Let us entwine
Your wretched soul is mine
Let us again embrace
And leave behind this damned human race
Your body is nothing but an empty shell
Your soul belongs with me in hell
I infect your soul
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RavenShadows
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Re: I Infect Your Soul
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 02:15:58 AM AEST
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| Again, an amazing write. Your words are angsty and moody but almost musical at the same time. Great poem.. |
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Re: I Infect Your Soul
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by Rylo on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 02:21:21 AM AEST
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| Awesome write. Take me in your embrace, then feel my soul leave this place. With you is where I belong, with you is what I long. So please come to me in the night, and fill me with fright. For I promise not to put up a fight. Excellent job, and keep them coming. |
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Re: I Infect Your Soul
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 07:09:38 PM AEST
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Everyone is bound to have their own mental imagery, but I read that and think of a modern day siren. Calling, beckoning, a seductively sweet haunting melody that draws me into the treachery of an awaiting demoness. Goergeous to gaze upon, deadly to embrace. And I am helpless once attuned to her song.
Very well written in my opinion.
Naz ~
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Re: I Infect Your Soul
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by tonya_turner on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 11:55:23 AM AEST
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One may think this is a sick dark poem but I love it!!
Tonya Turner |
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