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This Is The Time
Contributed by
Rylo
on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:48:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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A blackened sky,
In a world full of lies.
This is the time,
That many will die.
People begging for salvation,
And people dying from starvation.
Many are lost,
As millions are paying the cost.
Souls being pulled from lightness,
And being dragged into darkness.
Due to selfishness,
Our world is no longer bliss.
Brother against brother,
And neighbor verses neighbor.
All because the other,
Becomes a stranger.
The time is near,
When all will fear,
The wrath of God,
That is almost hear.
2004 Copyright By: Ronald William Smith
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2004-08-08 01:48:34]
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Re: This Is The Time
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by RavenShadows on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:51:35 AM AEST
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| I thought this was very well written except for the last line. I believe that you meant "here" instead of "hear" or am I wrong? |
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Re: This Is The Time
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 02:05:14 AM AEST
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brilliant write. ive written about this...not quite so nicely and kind of offensive so its nice that you still get your point across without offending anyone.
"All because the other,
Becomes a stranger."
i liked that part best for some reason. the rest of it is undeniably fantastic. =] |
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Re: This Is The Time
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by shelby on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 02:38:37 AM AEST
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you hit everything right on the mark brother against brother etc the world isnt such a nice place to be anymore with all the war and sadness thank god Im blessed to have your sweet heart in my life Ron.
Michelle |
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Re: This Is The Time
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 08:06:39 PM AEST
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lol you just put the last nail to the coffin .
Its so true and wise in your poem.
You did an awsome job on this one. |
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Re: This Is The Time
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by tonya_turner on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 11:56:48 AM AEST
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| So true are the words you write. Gave me goose bumps. I love it. |
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