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Fear
Contributed by
Lizard
on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 01:13:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A soft voice echoes through the past
as if a moment of happiness
would subside the horrible blast
A child trembles in fear
as the handprint across her face
couldn't be more clear
The tears of sorrow and pain
tumble down her cheeks
to prove that she is sain
The child stands in horror
to afraid to run away
but to be pushed down lower
She waits to hear her command
but in her fear
forgets to stand
So she meets again
the pain and cruelty
of that awful hand.
Copyright ©
Lizard
... [
2004-08-08 13:13:23]
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Re: Fear
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 03:10:13 PM AEST
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lizard,
that was an awesome poem. write more great poems like that.
love beanie
ps. email me :) |
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Re: Fear
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 05:42:43 PM AEST
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:'(
sad, but yet soo...amazing and awful at the same time.
i love it, terrific write!
- Bethani - |
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Re: Fear
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by Kazzy1231 on
Sunday, 14th June 2009 @ 02:08:45 PM AEST
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| Well wrote,reminds me of my childhood (bad memories of child abuse) though. |
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