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Adolescent girl
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
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Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 04:19:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I loved a boy, he went away,
Felt just like the other day,
But when he left his love denied,
And in my room I sat and cried,
I locked the door, was left alone,
So no one could see I hadnt grown,
Adolescent girl with lots to learn,
But in my mind itd past my turn,
In the shade its cold and hidden,
Once youre there to leave, forbidden,
I try to die but Im never dead,
Im still just dreaming in your bed,
I want to sleep and never waken,
And when I bleed Im never shaken,
When I scream Im never heeded,
Just like now Im never needed,
Slash open my numbing skin,
I have no God so I have no sin,
You think Im selling myself short,
But no better was I taught,
So let it run and let it pour,
Cut again to bleed some more,
Bloodstained sheets and bloodstained mind,
My bloody body you will find,
But dont cry for me, Im not worth your tears,
Me being dead am the least of your fears,
Im glad now Im no longer a freak,
But ending my life Im not strong Im weak,
But no longer do I run and hide,
And no more times would I have cried,
The sky is grey but now it clears,
And my eyes are filled with happy tears
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Re: Adolescent girl
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by waos on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 04:23:55 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was really good. I loved the story in it because I feel it too, I love the wording you used, it rocks. And I love the last 2 lines too. That really rocked and I am gonna be checking out your other stuff from now on I think. Thanks for posting it. I mean it. |
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Re: Adolescent girl
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by darkplaidbabe on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 07:37:08 PM AEST
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i cant express how lovely this is. its so tragic and so sweetly sad. amazing poem .
Brynna |
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Re: Adolescent girl
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:32:47 AM AEST
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amazing write. I loved it. I wont leave loz, im here now
and always will be. i really liked
"So let it run and let it pour,
Cut again to bleed some more,
Bloodstained sheets and bloodstained mind,
My bloody body you will find"
great work
love always, Dizza
xoxoxoxo |
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Re: Adolescent girl
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by TheBlackVoid on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:27:40 AM AEST
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Great write..as many other poems i can truely relate to this..great way of expressing ur feelings..and i'll be looking for more
Alucia, |
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Re: Adolescent girl
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by Hakiokusaken on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 07:59:42 PM AEST
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| Wow that was good. Great poem |
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Re: Adolescent girl
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 05:34:01 AM AEST
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it's a beautiful poem!
i bet all us cutters and ex-cutters will agree! |
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